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📋 题目


🎯 题型分析

项目内容
题型Agree/Disagree(观点类)
话题教育类 - 高等教育政策
关键词university education, free, everyone
考察能力表达并论证自己的立场

🔍 审题要点


📝 高分范文


📊 结构拆解

【开头段】
├── 引出话题:sparked considerable debate
├── 让步:acknowledge noble intentions
└── 立场:neither practical nor equitable

【主体段1 - 让步】
├── 让步信号:Admittedly
├── 论点:promote social equality
├── 解释:remove financial barriers
└── 例子:working-class families

【主体段2 - 反驳】
├── 转折:However
├── 论点1:financial implications immense
├── 论点2:overconsumed and undervalued
└── 延伸:taxpayer shouldn't subsidise

【主体段3 - 解决方案】
├── 过渡:A more balanced approach
├── 方案:targeted financial support
└── 效果:accessible without burden

【结尾段】
├── 重申:equal access commendable, but...
└── 总结:targeted approach more sustainable

✨ 语言亮点

高分词汇

词汇/短语含义用法
spark debate引发争论The issue has sparked debate
prohibitive高得令人却步的prohibitive cost
deter from阻止,使打消念头deter students from applying
level the playing field创造公平竞争环境level the playing field
divert funds转移资金divert funds from healthcare
blanket (adj.)一刀切的blanket free tuition
targeted support针对性支持targeted financial support

高分句型


🔄 可迁移表达

这些表达可以用于其他类似话题:

原句可迁移到
"remove financial barriers"医疗免费、公共服务话题
"enhance social mobility"教育公平、贫富差距话题
"placing an unsustainable burden on public finances"任何涉及政府支出的话题
"based on merit rather than wealth"公平竞争、机会平等话题
"targeted support to those who genuinely cannot afford"任何涉及补贴政策的话题

💭 思考延伸


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